3.28.13

When I read story's I am often drawn into books with some action with main character about my age and something's with caring. I like it because I have a brother and I like to feel what the character feels if its his sorrow or his happiness. In the book Eldest by Christopher Paolini Eragon shows compassion and every moment he feels that's why I read this book and I hope you do

In the begging of the story Eragon was lying on the floor of du faturn the dwarf and Varden Capitol.

3.27.13

In the books there are a lot of caring. In Cinderella she cares for her animal friends that help her a lot. In eldest by Christopher Paolini Eragon goes on a journey with his friends to save the mighty country of Aligesia from the king.

In the book Eragon is detriment to take careof his brother even in battle. Get back you fool you get killed. Eragon sees his brother in battle of the burning plains against one of the most powerful people in the kingdom the twins. He would be going half way around the world but he wouldn't forget his brother. He wondered how roran and horst were doing back in carnvhall. Roran was grappling with some difficult problem. Still, Roran seemed well enough, if a bit drawn, which comforted Eragon.

3.20.13

Literary Essay Rough Plan

Claim:in Eldest Eragon is concerned about his cousin roran and his friends.



Reason: this shows of Eragon cares foe his brother.


Supporting Example 1 He wondered how Roran, Horst, and everyone else from Carvahall was doing.


Supporting Example 2 Roran was grappling with some difficult problem. Still, Roran seemed well enough, if a bit drawn, which comforted Eragon.


Supporting Example 2 Eragon’s heart skipped a beat as he recognized his cousin. You fool! Get
away from them! You’ll be killed.
Reason:this shows eragons trust with his friends

3.19.13

Literary Essay Rough Plan

Claim:in Eldest Eragon is concerned about his cousin roran and his village

Reason: this shows


Supporting Example 1 He wondered how Roran, Horst, and everyone else from Carvahall was doing.


Supporting Example 2 Roran was grappling with some difficult problem. Still, Roran seemed well enough, if a bit drawn, which comforted Eragon.


Supporting Example 2 Eragon’s heart skipped a beat as he recognized his cousin. You fool! Get
away from them! You’ll be killed.